Re: Christianity and Naturism

On Sat, 03 May 2008 08:29:41 GMT, "Dario Western"
<dariowestern@[EMAIL PROTECTED]
> wrote:

>http://video.google.com.au/videoplay?docid=2829687674938567033&q=source:012517866159394219130&hl=en
>
>Here is a video that I made about the correlation between Christianity
and 
>naturism.

Pretty cool, Dario. I liked hearing you and seeing you at last. I
never thought that would happen. Congratulations.

I am sure I would not do as well as you, but I have to say I lost you
not too far into it. Just too much stuff to ask myself whether I
agreed or not, and by the time I got my mind back to you... lost.

Some suggestions:

		Tell us what you are going to say.
		Say it.
		Tell us what you said

		Keep it simple.

		Use examples. The more grabbing, the better

		Show us the points you are making on a slide,
		perhaps behind or beside you.
		Four points is good. Seven is max.

		Make more than one video if you need to.
		Don't try to cram all your points into one video.
		Allow yourself to make each point really relevant.

		Production values, as other posters have said, count.

I think you should keep at it. You have a good voice and a good way of
speaking. Thanks. :-)